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REVIEW: Stepping on Roses GN 3




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vashfanatic



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PostPosted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 9:39 am Reply with quote
Interesting review as always, Lissa....but:

It's "newcomer," nor "new comer."
You need a comma between "alas" and "even," "Sure" and "it feels," and "melodrama" and "however."
And you don't need a comma between "but" and "a guilty pleasure."

I only bring it up because I feel your reviews are otherwise so professional that typos give a wrong impression that you rushed through them, something I cannot believe given how thoughtfully these yours written.
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here-and-faraway



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PostPosted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:29 am Reply with quote
The cover makes it look like he's trying to nurse.

I enjoyed your review. Thanks!
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