Forum - View topicBe honest, do you think this would be a good manga?
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Me and my friend are thinking of making a manga called "Jikan no Nagare" about a 16 year old kid named "Tetsuya Akiyama" who's parents died in a car crash when he was 3. One day he decides to go through his parents things, which he never did until now. He stumbles upon a journal from his father. Inside he finds a note saying "I just cant bring myself to drag my own son into all this. I know I can't keep it from him forever, but I can try for as long as possible. The boys power must be sealed away, until the day comes when Yasha returns. That's when we'll need his power the most" . He brushed it of as if it was just a joke or a story, until one day, something seemed off. It was an unusually stormy day. The sky filled with black clouds, thunder, lightning striking, and Tetsuya felt uneasy. He couldn't explain why, but, something was off. On his way to school he was attacked by weird creatures under the order of someone named "Yasha". Hearing this, Tetsuya couldn't help but think to himself; "There's no way. It couldn't be. There's no way that all of that stuff in dad's notes was true. It just cant be.". Tetsuya is beaten to a pulp, and when all hope seems lost, Tetsuya chest started to shine a bright blue glow around his body, and emitted a warm wave from his being, healing all his wounds. Tetsuya could feel his body starting to change. His hair extended from a short light brown to a long deep black. His blue eyes turned into a dead and deep yellow. The power sealed inside him by his father have finally awakened. --- That's all I got for now.
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Errinundra
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I'm sorry, but self-promotion isn't permitted unless it has some relevance to actual anime or manga. There are forums dedicated to fan fiction. Best of luck.
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