Forum - View topic[Error Report] Air Plot Summary
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Key
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The second paragraph of the plot summary for Air (TV) is merely a reworded version of the first paragraph.
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dormcat
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I'd say the second one was better written (much less repeating itself), yet it lacks the plot mentioned in the last sentence of the first one. What's your opinion?
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Key
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I haven't watched the series myself, but based purely on literary merit I do agree that the second paragraph is the better of the two.
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dormcat
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Done.
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