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NEWS: Fusai Naba's Aliens Area Manga Ends




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Yune Amagiri



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2022 10:21 am Reply with quote
It could have been so much better with a much slower pace, since the second week i couldn't help but wonder every sunday if some in-between chapters were skipped.
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WANNFH



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2022 10:41 am Reply with quote
And here comes the last to the chopping block, with no one really unexpected that. Next time we will not see the axe for a while, depending on how OniYome and G&G going to present themselves.

Yune Amagiri wrote:
It could have been so much better with a much slower pace, since the second week i couldn't help but wonder every sunday if some in-between chapters were skipped.
Well, here comes the thing - if you do not establish yourself very early, you're most likely dead in Jump, and that is what exactly happened.
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Yune Amagiri



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2022 11:55 am Reply with quote
Indeed, this harsh rule has always been true and will probably be even harsher with the sales of the magazine declining more and more each year, at this point i can't remember how many promising mangas were axed, sometimes i just hope they could be more lenient but sadly they can't afford to.

I have more hope for OniYome and G&G but i can't see them reaching a complete year publication so far or maybe by switching to Jump +.
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MagicPolly



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2022 2:27 pm Reply with quote
Just read the last chapter, writing was on the wall for a while. The conclusion felt even worse than Super Smartphone and I can't imagine the volume ending will be better
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2022 2:28 pm Reply with quote
WANNFH wrote:
Well, here comes the thing - if you do not establish yourself very early, you're most likely dead in Jump, and that is what exactly happened.


It's a double-edged sword for sure. Some stories need a slow pace in order to be told effectively, but Jump strongly discourages this sort of writing. The result is that way too many stories try to go for the jugular right away, and many end up feeling rushed, or, at worst, every manga feels the same as they all try to go as big as possible early on.
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BrainBlow



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2022 3:13 pm Reply with quote
Can't say I'm surprised. The first three or so chapters were quite frankly just dull. Especially the first chapter had poor structure and not much to really get invested in.
When it slowed down and took on an almost noir-like quality it actually got interesting, so it's unfortunate it ended up like this. The first few chapters honestly smells of poor editorial demands since it's so inconsistent with the chapters where the series actually shines.
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lossthief
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2022 4:00 pm Reply with quote
Wyvern wrote:
WANNFH wrote:
Well, here comes the thing - if you do not establish yourself very early, you're most likely dead in Jump, and that is what exactly happened.


It's a double-edged sword for sure. Some stories need a slow pace in order to be told effectively, but Jump strongly discourages this sort of writing. The result is that way too many stories try to go for the jugular right away, and many end up feeling rushed, or, at worst, every manga feels the same as they all try to go as big as possible early on.


It's funny to see people saying this series' start needed to be slower when it spent over a month of publication with low stakes, low conflict "missions" that amounted to our MC handing out parking citations and giving directions. Aliens Area is the last series I would say had a fast or "rushed" start, and it only started moving at all when it was obvious it was getting cancelled.
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Soulwarfare



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2022 5:06 pm Reply with quote
another one bites the dust
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BrainBlow



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2022 5:44 pm Reply with quote
lossthief wrote:
Wyvern wrote:
WANNFH wrote:
Well, here comes the thing - if you do not establish yourself very early, you're most likely dead in Jump, and that is what exactly happened.


It's a double-edged sword for sure. Some stories need a slow pace in order to be told effectively, but Jump strongly discourages this sort of writing. The result is that way too many stories try to go for the jugular right away, and many end up feeling rushed, or, at worst, every manga feels the same as they all try to go as big as possible early on.


It's funny to see people saying this series' start needed to be slower when it spent over a month of publication with low stakes, low conflict "missions" that amounted to our MC handing out parking citations and giving directions. Aliens Area is the last series I would say had a fast or "rushed" start, and it only started moving at all when it was obvious it was getting cancelled.

All of the slower stuff was many chapters in. Before that it was rushed yet at the same time hardly did anything. Sloppy worldbuilding, rushed story beats and no real establishment of personal stakes and motivations that would resonate with an audience. The MC's siblings felt more like a plot convenience than actual characters.
The slower chapters that came later were considerably better with how they characterized and worldbuilt.
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