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Conava
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Conava and Kilo Slayer are brother and sister. Their dad is a powerful demon, their mom is a gaurdian. Kilo is in training to be the next time demon, but he also loves Conava's best friend Melonie angels who is half faeire and half angel. Conava who is handed the cards, 13 very powerful cards that each have their own power, she much protect the cards and prevent them from falling into the wrong hands, while also she is in engaged to the best guy ever names Rayo. One day Kilo is out training in the fields with their father who is the current Time Demon. the Td sees kilo looking at melonie. Kilo is told that if he is seen looking at melonie ever again that conava will be killed (kilo is very over protective of his sister) kilo shakes his head and the t.d sends a snake at melonie.Kilo sees it and tries to block it. It sorta works the snakes changes paths and bites Conava on the leg. She wakes up three days later. It turns out that the curse was that the person it hits would never get married becasue the one they love would die on the day of the wedding. Rayo is killed the next day. Then the T.d finds out that Conava is the one that holds the cards and wants her dead. Her mom tries to defened her and his killed right in front of her. Just before the mom died she was able to open the door to earth that Conava,Kilo, and Melonie escape in. When they got their Conava makes it her misson to kill her father and avange the deaths of her boyfriend and mother. Melonie then finds out that she is Conava GArdian angel. Se becomes on of the shields that are ment to protect Conava other thenher brother they meet other humans that are desined to help with their misson. With the deaths of the two people she cared most about Conava becomes suicideal,and works at a night club as a dancer. Last edited by Conava on Thu Aug 07, 2003 3:48 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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MelancholyDevil
 Posts: 311 Location: Louisiana |
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How about this for an anime?
An angel is killed during a battle between Heven and (my fav) Hell. She falls to earth and befriends a boy (the one whom she litteraly fell on). She tells him she has to get back to Heven because she is the only one who knows Satan's final plan to conqer all of exsistence, and has to warn God of his plan before it takes action in a couple of months. In order to get back to Heven she has to have a ratio of 100 to 1 good deeds done before she dies (so for every one bad deed, she has to do 100 more good ones). I Haven't decided if it will be serious or a comeady. |
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Conava
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That sound like one I would go out and buy
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MelancholyDevil
Posts: 311 Location: Louisiana |
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Really, wow, thanks for the compleliment.
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Animefreak08
 Posts: 882 Location: Michigan ftw. |
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I came up with a post war thing...In the year 2089 war ravaged space and earth...the war bettween the AC colonies and the IMP colonies is over but peace has not been attained...As people in the streets brake out in senless fighting, terrorists take over towns...but a boy is on a quest to find his father and when he lands on the colony where his father lives...he finds something that could destroy all of the human race....[/i]
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MelancholyDevil
Posts: 311 Location: Louisiana |
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Dude, Well Conava, it looks like this is the unoffical anime writters thread, you might as well go ahead and make it offical by editing your original post. I thought about starting a thread like this but there's no need now. |
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Animefreak08
Posts: 882 Location: Michigan ftw. |
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Do u like it? Iv'e already drawn a page of it and wrote 2 volumes!
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MelancholyDevil
Posts: 311 Location: Louisiana |
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You sound alot like me, although my story isn 't very original (I'm not talking about the angel story I posted eariler, although I don't know if that's original either). Not to mention I just can't seem to write it, every time I sit down to do so, I can't find a way to convey the story to the reader.
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Craeyst Raygal
 Posts: 1383 Location: In the garage, beneath a 1970 MGB GT. |
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Actually, there was a thread about this topic some time ago. animenewsnetwork.com/bbs/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=2363
Conava, you've got some good ideas in there though it seems a little muddled at the moment. A bit more info on the intent of the series (point you'd like to make or the overriding concept) would help a lot. #1Evafan, there's already a series very much along the lines of what you described. It's called Happy World and I don't know if it has been licensed yet. Animefreak08, good trailer tease, but what's the word on the story? Is it about the boy, is it about the colonies, what's the deal? |
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MelancholyDevil
Posts: 311 Location: Louisiana |
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Damn, I though I had a good one, aw well, I guess it's back to the drawing board.
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Conava
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I'm getting ready to post a little bit of the script I'm working on
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MelancholyDevil
Posts: 311 Location: Louisiana |
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Damn, I though I had a good one, aw well, I guess it's back to the drawing board.
Well, sometimes you should start up old topic after a while, give the newbies a chance to talk about it and gives the original posters a chance to tell you what's changed. |
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Conava
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Have you notice alot of animes are a little like soap opreas
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Delthayre
 Posts: 414 Location: One of the good United States |
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Here is the prior thread. I won't be adding anything to this, creative catharsis as it is.
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monkeyDluffy4
 Posts: 145 Location: Watanabe Shaved Ice |
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I've got a story, too! It's the year 2688. Earth gets thrown into a nuclear winter and all of Earth's technology is destroyed. People have to re-create life and continue to re-do history. Somewhere about the Neo-Middle Ages, an evil Dictator, Sicera Immiserricor, comes to power by killing the king, Musashi Kuroto and splits the world into two halves, East Earth (Sphaidin) where Sicera and the nobles live, and West Earth (Todar) where commoners are forced to live. Musashi's son, Kyoji survived and was sent to a training area in West Earth called the Land of Hallowed Sounds to train in a new style of fighting, using music. Under Ronan, a strong warrior who trained with Musashi, and with Soluu, a boy with a gift for speaking and a strong sense of justice, Kyoji must train to overcome Sicera and re-unite Earth. However, training doesn't go smoothly, and Sicera himself, (an incredibly powerful mage) attacks them, and wipes Soluu out in a single blast...5 years later, Kyoji and Ronan, along with Honami, Kyoji's fiancee, Dice, a mysterious mercenary, and Ryu, a proud man who (likes to think he) has a way with the ladies, must search for the ultimate musical power, which can defeat Sicera, the FUNK.
It's called: Banzaii Funk. ~Ore wa Monkey D. Luffy! Kaizoku-oh ni naru otokko!~ |
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