The Edit List
Blue Gender 17
by Kyle Pope,
Blue Gender 17: Eclosion
1) Yuji's "You goddamn bug!" changed to "You damn bug!" as Yuji goes hand-to-mandible with the Blue.
2) Scene of Su kissing Brenda and Brenda subsequently pulling Su to the floor of the command vehicle after Brenda catches Su at the computer cut.
They're leaving much of the violence intact (possibly because the Blue now have lavender blood instead of red) but sex remains strictly taboo even when it's only implied.
Kyle Pope
1) Yuji's "You goddamn bug!" changed to "You damn bug!" as Yuji goes hand-to-mandible with the Blue.
2) Scene of Su kissing Brenda and Brenda subsequently pulling Su to the floor of the command vehicle after Brenda catches Su at the computer cut.
They're leaving much of the violence intact (possibly because the Blue now have lavender blood instead of red) but sex remains strictly taboo even when it's only implied.
Kyle Pope
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