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Kawaii Kohaku



Joined: 29 Jun 2014
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 29, 2014 7:59 pm Reply with quote
Hi I am Kawaii Kohaku.

I don't mean to be a bother but my text portion of my entry is messed up. Words are all jumble together and mixed. I know for a fact I didn't enter it like that at all.

This is what shows right now:
"Sailor Moon means so much to me because the story and characters taught me many lessons when I was growing up; one of the most important being: it's okay to be imperfect. Usagi's character shows this by being flawed and relatable. is klutzy, whiny aShend not an A+ student, but she is also strong, passionate and loving. She proves that you are able to overcome your weaknesses and accomplish things that you never thought were possible. She taught me that even though I'm not perfect, if I'm faced with a challenge… it'll soon be moon dust."

But in the third sentence it seems like the word "she" was moved from the beginning of the sentence and then smashed into the middle of the word "and"

So it should read:

"Sailor Moon means so much to me because the story and characters taught me many lessons when I was growing up; one of the most important being: it's okay to be imperfect. Usagi's character shows this by being flawed and relatable. She is klutzy, whiny and not an A+ student, but she is also strong, passionate and loving. She proves that you are able to overcome your weaknesses and accomplish things that you never thought were possible. She taught me that even though I'm not perfect, if I'm faced with a challenge… it'll soon be moon dust."

I don't understand the mix up of how it happened but I hope it can be fixed. Thank you.
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