Forum - View topicA original Naruto Idea (please read)
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vengeance01
Posts: 8 Location: West Yorkshire, UK |
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Hi all this is my first post here and i like what i see, anyway i had this idea when i was watching the episodes 48 to 50 (rock lee Vs Gaara) and i had an idea for a new type style of jutsu. i decided to base it on necromancy, because though i haven't seen any further then 50 (because its hard to naruto around my town) i think no ninja has the ability to control spirits and corpses. could any of you please read my techniques below and surgest anything that could be changed/added.
thanks. Death techniques: Creeping death technique (hofuku no jutsu) This technique has the ability to create an undead replica of the user; the amount that is created depends on how much chakra is used. It is much like the shadow replication technique but has one major flaw, the undead replications look like rotting versions of their user thus making it useless for hiding amongst them. Its major advantage is that unlike the shadow replication technique these undead replicas can take more then a single hit making them extremely hard to defeat. Dislocation technique (dansou no jutsu) This technique needs immunity to intense pain, as the name describes it the user dislocates one or all of his limbs. When he combines this with sharp movements such as turning his torso, the user can propel their limb with incredible speed. The longer the user spins his limb the more momentum they will gain and the harder it will hit. Experienced ninjas with this technique often apply the Death grip technique (explained later) to hold weapons such as kunai in their dislocated arms so that they can kill opponents with much higher success rate. Death grip technique (akuryoku no jutsu) This is commonly used in conjunction with the dislocation technique. this is used on the hands of the user putting one of them in a death grip, when the seal is complete the user touches the opposite hand (usually the hand holding a weapon) to activate the grip. This grip is so strong that if used while strangling a victim the hand would crush the victim's neck killing him almost instantly. Bone lock technique (joumae no jutsu) This technique is similar to the death grip technique, but instead of locking a hand in place it locks the joint on where the user touches. This is mainly used on opponents because of its time period; it normally takes around five minutes to come loose again. The one advantage of this technique is that it makes it easier to immobilise agile opponents, it is also easier to break the bones of the victims but this is also a disadvantage if used on the user. Soul conjunction technique (setsuzokushi no jutsu) This technique is rarely used, when it is the user has finished the seal he/she must either whisper the victims name or touch them for it to activate. When activated the user and the victims become one, so when the user is injured the victim is as well, this is mainly used by hunting ninjas when they have failed in an assassination attempt. This can be deactivated by the user repeating the seal, it also can be left on but it slowly drains the chakra. Soul whisper technique (sasayaki no jutsu) This is the first technique to be taught to pupils, the user is granted the ability to summon a loved one that has passed away to aid them as a guide. This maybe either scouting ahead or merely for conversation about places that are familiar to the spirit. This needs to be mastered if the pupil wishes to learn the death jutsu in the hidden death village. Death puppet technique (guujin no jutsu) This is the hardest and most exhausting technique to create and pull off successfully; the user requires the body and enough experience with illusion techniques. Firstly the user must write out the scroll for the reanimation of the body, placing the completed seal inside of the bodies’ torso. Next the user places the seal on the body to bring it to life this gives the user the ability to control the body with thoughts alone and also project his voice. After the body has been prepared the user must make a scroll that dictates that when activated for combat the body creates an illusion of the person that the user wishes. For example the user may want to make the body look like him to confuse the opponent or a person close to the opponent if the user knows of any. Bloodline of the Hidden death village: Necrina clan: Only to be discovered recently the Necrina clan fell into the darkness of history many years ago, at the current time the first members of the clan did not want anything to do with the clan that they had and ignored their heritage. Because of this they did not know of their bloodline, the Necrina bloodline a rare occurrence where when a descendant of the clan came into contact with a spirit when they commune with the dead, their right arm and side of the face slowly crumbles away. After the village was founded by a friend of one of the members only ten years ago who became the first hokage, the village has remained hidden underground until it had the strength to fight off any possible invaders. The first hokage started the search for more information of this mysterious clan and discovered that a book dating over a hundred years have been written, teaching people on the art of sendo jutsu with a list of all the techniques that had been created as a basis for the clan. Unfortunately the clan did not want any part of it so it was buried under the house in Kohona; the hokage sent a group of ninja to collect the book immediately and to return it to the village. The has not been extinguished though, a sole survivor of the clan married a wife and had three children, they are now all 14 (making them triplets) and have returned to Kohona to take part in the Chūnin exams. Because these techniques have never been seen before, they are able to cause fear to even the Jounins, able to strike their opponents with fear before the fight even begins this made it extremely easy for them. Being just under the age of Naruto, they are still capable of beating most ninjas who have more experience then themselves. Physical Blight (shinteki shukusatsu): This is the name that was given to the bloodline when it was thought to be a disease, the first recorded case of it manifesting was when the current generations’ great great great grand father complained about seeing his dead wife. A week after the complaints the skin of his right arm and side of his face began to peal off in great chunks, causing much concern the grand fathers daughter called the village healing ninja because their extensive knowledge of diseases. But when the ninja told them that there wasn’t a cure the grand father took his life instead of suffering with the slow death that he’d thought he would have. It is now known that a 99.5% chance would receive this gift, the only two recorded cases were the grand father and Necrina Rinchiko. When the gift has fully manifest it can open a gateway to the underworld where a soul collector is able to sustain itself in the psychical world, after it has come through it will attack the person the user was looking at. This may seem effective but the soul collector is slow and the user is completely immobile since his body is required to keep the portal open, if he is pushed and interrupted in any way the portal closes and the soul collector will die. The users use this when collecting strong souls so they can enter the warriors’ garden when they die. Last edited by vengeance01 on Thu Jun 22, 2006 10:55 am; edited 1 time in total |
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Dargonxtc
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wow, well you certainly have imagination. I am not sure what any of this is good for though. You know I think there is a Naruto card game that you may enjoy playing.
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vengeance01
Posts: 8 Location: West Yorkshire, UK |
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Its for a flash animation i'm doing, unfortuneatly the voices will be english (i can't speak japanese) but the flash will run at the same length as a episode so that may make people happy
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